Writing Practice :

my family

There are four people in my family.

I have a mother, father , younger brother.

My father is 69 years old.

My mother is 65 years old.

and she will retired at December.

My younger brother work at a university.

he is a accounting.

I live with my family.

Our house is extremely small.

House is expensive in Taiwan.

老師的建議:

My family

There are four people in my family. There is my mom, dad, and younger brother. My dad is 69 years old. My mom is 65 and she will retire in December. My brother is an accountant and we live in an extremely small.

We have lots of good times. We take walks on Sundays and cook together on Saturdays. We try and spend as much time as we can together.

I love my family and I hope that everybody can get an opportunity to feel the love that I get from them every day. Family is very important.

My hobby

I have many hobbies. My hobby is watching tv and playing computer game. When I was young, I didn’t have smartphones. My parents allow me to watch tv after I finish my homework. That was a happy time. We spend time company with my parents.

In Taiwan, we watch Japanese, Korean, and American TV shows. Besides that, I’m interested in film production at that time. So I choose to study communication at the university. My professor teaches us some film critic theory and some film production technic. We use some professional software and a camera to make a film. My friends